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    PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 6:53 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

    I've been meaning to write an English story, but I was afraid. Mainly because I never read an English novel before. Well, it didn't stopped me, that's for sure. Think it as a sample for English forums, if we ever have one. Anyway, I started this because I wanted to do something like my latest little story, "Black Dog". Writing "Black Dog" was tough because it was restricting. Wasn't allowing me to do things my way. Villains in 50's were...gentle.I wanted to make a world full of people who make idle conversations. That way it would feel warm. And I barely know any songs during that period. I wanted to put references in my story. References to other books, movies, video games and songs. Restricting myself to 1950 wasn't helping much. So, what I did was I changed the story a bit, put two brothers --amateurs, who fight all the time and try to make a living like leeches. They will find themselves in a complicated series of events -somehow- and will have to make tough decisions.

    Chaos Theory results in the unintended consequences of actions that impact our lives. Each and every one of us has experienced this in our own personal lives. So basically it's like Butterfly Effect at a smaller scale (mostly). Some people don't even realize what they've triggered. Some use this to shape the world, intentionally.

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    PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:05 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

    I read it before you posted here. Because you showed me them, and i think i am the first one who read your story. In your story diologues are interesting and realistic. But i need to read second chapter, so maybe i will understand what your story tell us, really i can't write satisfactory comments here now.
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    PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 4:11 am Reply with quoteBack to top

    I think 50's is a good time to start with an English story. It seems as a good story. Your characters are fine. Your writing style is also good. But I am still curios to read the coming chapters to see how the story is going to develop.

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    PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 5:48 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

    Actually, you confused this with my other story Smile I was refering to "Siyah Köpek". This story occuring in 97'.

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    PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 3:32 am Reply with quoteBack to top

    Maybe I have done that.

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